Saturday, August 23, 2014

The Vehicle

 PHOTO PROMPT -Copyright-Roger Bultot


The vehicle, every morning, was found on the spot;


From where it was brought


The owner, driver had died on a fateful night;


None came forward to claim the vehicle's right


Nobody came at the auction;


Cops just left it at the station


Then again it was at its location;


Nothing else could be done


So it was left there;


And nobody came near


The nomads got in;


Under bad weather condition


Inside, they found a man;


They became friends soon


He said this is my treasure;


I give it to you with pleasure


Hope I will be in heaven



13 comments:

  1. My first attempt to write a poem...I know a school going child writes like this but I couldn't resist from posting,after all it is my first attempt :0
    Constructive criticism is most welcome, be gentle please:)

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  2. quite mysterious...finding a man in there and the friendship that formed. i like your poetical verses. well done!

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    1. The man here is ghost.
      I am glad you liked it:)

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  3. There is a lot of mystery here, especially the appearance of the man. Well done.

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    1. The driver's ghost drove the vehicle every night and it was harmless and sympathetic so it gave it to the homeless.

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  4. Dear Anu,

    Interesting story in verse. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  5. Dear Anu, Welcome to Friday Flash Fiction and I like your verse. Thanks! Nan :)

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  6. Anupat, Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Interesting and well-written piece. : ) ---Susan

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  7. Well done Anu.. Not bad at all for your first attempt in poem.. :)

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